The feedback I received was predominantly positive, the students commenting really seemed to like my idea and how I clarified how it is different from another popular site, Quizlet.
This time I tried to have the camera in a better place than last time so the video quality (or lack thereof) wasn't distracting. I also tried to be more fluent in my speech and sound less nervous. Moreover, I tried to show students what it would be like to use StuddyBuddy, rather than just tell them what it's about.
This seems like a good concept. I like how you created an easier alternative to studying. Accessing it i say only concern. How easy and accessible will this be on a phone and a laptop? Overall, good job. Here is my post http://cristalsicard.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
ReplyDeleteHayley,
ReplyDeleteI really like your video. I found that you took on what constructive criticism was made and really gave a great presentation. I like that you gave a full body presentation, use hand motions and props. It definitely keeps the view engaged. My only additional feedback would be to wear something a little more formal, while it is not a requirement, I think it would hit your pitch out of the park.
Check out mine if you have time:
http://nicoleslifeatuf.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Regards,
Nicole
Hi Hayley,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch because I felt like you were just having conversation with your audience. I also liked that you incorporated props such as textbooks for it. I think your idea sounds pretty cool and I would totally use it. The only thing I would add is how all this information for exams goes into the program as students from different schools have different text books with different information for exams. Check mine out if you'd like http://carolinalafuent3003.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html